This is great, very powerful. I love the questions and the occasional rhyming. Good job. Nice second chapter too, just as intense.

God Bless Ypu
~Holli x

o.m.g
that was just intense.

So sad! LOVE IT!
Grtz Silencia
ps: where do you get the inspiration for this?

Awesome!

i read all your poems but i really like this one
although all of them were good this one has more words and such
its amazing!

really something Maya would write! Here is a continuation of the poem:
And I reach out my hand
Touch her hair
Saddness begone
Life's not fair
She looks up
Tears fall
Cause she waited for this so long
And now it's here
Taking away her fear