you mentioned this on the fanfic that this goes too and I thought I'd check it out. good job. and like i said before, bittersweetishness.

I liked this- I thought it had a nice rhythm to it, and the subject matter was interesting.

I wish I could rhyme like you. I think I spelled that wrong. Whatever.

This makes me cringe. I keep thinking about walking across the floor and getting massive, hemhorraging cuts. lol...

Wow. Very nicely done and beautifully written. Simple in the best way. Great work.

- Koki