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| Erisah Mae 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked this- I thought it had a nice rhythm to it, and the subject matter was interesting. |
| someone's sideshow 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI wish I could rhyme like you. I think I spelled that wrong. Whatever. This makes me cringe. I keep thinking about walking across the floor and getting massive, hemhorraging cuts. lol... |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very nicely done and beautifully written. Simple in the best way. Great work. - Koki |