| Reviews for Better Left Unsaid |
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loveistheshortestformofsuicide 7/9/09 . chapter 3Omg, he just left him in the Burger King? Wtf? I didn't know Jack was so like...insensitive. Although, he did make him walk home from school that one time. /: It still sorta pissed me off. Lol. But yay for Josh walking all that way on his own. Wow. When I was in NY my dad had to lead us around everywhere. I know I would be lost. What with my sense of direction, or lack thereof. (x Haha, Josh is gonna get his own place? (: Aw. Is that where Dan comes in? I hope so, I always liked him. xD -hearts- |
diebyownhands 3/21/09 . chapter 5It's been so long since I logged in that I had forgotten my password! Any way I had to log in a tell you this was wonderful and that I hope you will continue to write. I read this all in one go and not once did I feel it didn't sound/flow right. Gah! Now I feel like reading the whole series again! |
Self Inflicted 11/15/08 . chapter 5I finally get down to reading this and I totally love you for doing this! I read this first before rereading Like It Or Not and now I feel this burning need to reread the entire arc. I really liked Patrick and I'm a little disappointed that he turned out to be well rather unsavoury but I really loved this. It's true that he had a life in between which I admit I've never really thought about. This one really made me cry a little but I'm sure you've noticed I'm a little biased towards Josh (he's my baby!). Tara is also incredibly annoying but I can't really bring myself to hate her. Might there be another piece from Kay's POV? |
James Hiwatari 11/12/08 . chapter 5So that is how Dan came into the picture. INteresting. It was a good ending, but because I liked it I half-wanted it not to end. Ah, but anyway, it is not like it was the last of them, so... Ahaha, I'm not making sense. Better stop now. I liked Dan there. More than I liked him before. Ah, whatever. Pretend I made some sense... James |
Amindaya 11/11/08 . chapter 5I'm so lad you wrote this. It's nice to see how he turned into the person he is when he meets Kay for the second time. |
red-headed psychopaths wanted 7/15/08 . chapter 4No wonder Josh was so angry when he met Kay again...he IGNORED him! Wow... I love this add-on to the series...I can't wait for more! |
The Intelligent Designer 7/7/08 . chapter 4This is your best writing out of all the stories in this series. I love it! |
Jowaco 7/6/08 . chapter 4Interesting take on Josh's life in the middle if you will, I'm enjoying it and do hope you continue. Please...Pretty Pretty please...don't make me beg...you know I'll do it! |
James Hiwatari 7/4/08 . chapter 4Yo wow wow, more chapters! More chapters, please! JOsh is getting a life. And a boyfriend, it seems. I liked the scene in his birthday. If I was in is place I would've freaked out. XDD DId you have this story planned when you wrote the other ones or are you making it all up now in a way that it fits with the rest? James |
James Hiwatari 7/4/08 . chapter 3Hahahaha... Loved that ending. I liked how JOsh remember he was once "normal" and walked to the place. Oh, I'm so proud of him! XD And let the kid grow up! (And when I think I Am 18 and I'm nowhere near living on my own, I can't help but feel that JOsh is more mature than I am... Which is, of course, really weird) |
James Hiwatari 7/4/08 . chapter 2I've always wonder what JOsh about his brother and Tara's marriage. Of course he would freak out. But the whole written thing is better than what I could have imagined. I hat psycanalists. They don't do it right. THey never do. I'm of the opinion that Josh should go to a PErson Centred Terapist. They know what to do. XDD (Of course, my opinion is biased, but I don't care. Mom does a very good job with me.) James |
James Hiwatari 7/4/08 . chapter 1Yeah, more Kay/Josh. I've missed them. The chapter was nice. JOsh is all fucked up, for a change. I almost feel sorry for him. But I don't. I don't feel sorry because it is his fucked life that makes the thing interesting. MWAHAHAHAHA I'm a little sadistic... |
Amindaya 7/3/08 . chapter 4Words cannot describe how great it is to see inside Josh's head during this time of his life, before he got into drugs and became an author. Thanks! |