 Aqua-eagle Sunshine 2009-04-15 . chapter 1It was really good. I thought the emotion in it was really realistic and i could feel it as i read. i think you portrayed how hard it is to leave someone you love even after they abuse you brilliantly. I think the main charcter is really strong, in a none typcal way. i found myself wishing there had been some mistake...but i was glad there wasn't it was more realistic that way. |
 princessbleachhead 2008-09-12 . chapter 1wow i loved it bless her. quinton needs therapy some serious deep minded therapy. bless her. greating writing. it was nice and easy to read. |
 Darkslilangel 2008-07-13 . chapter 1I don't know why but i cried reading this. Also, you might want to explain what Regents are b/c some readers are not from NY and won't know what it is. btw, it was good and hope you update ASAP. Just be glad I R&R this one. |
 Ayonom 2008-07-07 . chapter 1 so god!! u've gotten a lot better with your writing!
you've inspired me to improve my own! awesome job on this! |
 x3life 2008-07-04 . chapter 1aw this was really good!! but depressing =( |
 Lily Llynn 2008-07-04 . chapter 1Quite a few typos that irked me quite a bit, but it's pretty well-written, and the emotions are raw and real and felt pretty deeply by the reader. This is a pretty awesome oneshot, and I'm going to add it to my c2. (: |
 aussiegrl5070 2008-07-04 . chapter 1This is a great story. It made me tear up. It's like a part of you breaks when someone hits you, especially when it's someone you really care about. |
 letsuseswords 2008-07-03 . chapter 1Omg, I love it! It's wonderful! |