that's a nice poem. i like it a lot. it's sweet. and sad. *goes on ranting about how lovely your poetry is until someone needs to duct-tape her mouth shut* >.

I liked this. The rhyme scheme was good, simple but not too forced ya know? Kudos. I liked the content of this as well, despite it being a tad too cliched, it was nicely done - 'specially the last line. Anyways, keep up the good work.

great poem! i can totally relate...
once again, i loved the rhyming...i cant read stuff without rhyming...

Wow! You're really good at poetry, mommy! *nodnod*

This was amazing. I was honestly impressed. Plus, I'm a sucker for poetry that actually rhymes. Dunno what else to say, except GOOD JOB!

Interesting premise too. Taking someone for granted never ends well.

i do say thank you