cute, sweet, and powerful somehow. i like your wording about the skin feels too tight. the lines after just added more impact. beautiful.

I agree with Her Wishing Well, the baseball diamond mention really stood out for me, mostly as it was so unusual and unexpected. Fantastic

love it, awesome job. not only are my hot chocolates late night, but they're all night (and all day), and it doesn't do anything for my health, emotional or not.

by the way, i love your style. i want to it eat.

The first stanza is very captivating. I especially love the 'baseball diamond' imagery. I'm not sure why but its very intreguing. This poem is very powerful and sad at the same time. I loved it.