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| Koki Enwai 2008-07-08 ch 2,  | abuseSolid second chapter. December was much more relatable here. I've never read Harry Potter, so I have no idea how Ginny is personality-wise. . . I'm actually in the midst of writing a story that takes place at a boarding school (though it's not posted here, yet) so I had to do quite a bit of research for it. You could always try: w . boardingschoolreview . com (Just take out the spaces, of course.) They have reviews of nearly every boarding school in the US, with links to the school's own sights, as well as lots of stastical information that might prove useful. Anyway, I like it so far. The chapter was a bit on the short side, but I'm very anxious for the next one. - Koki |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, December, so far, seems like a terror! I couldn't relate to her at all. . . Maybe she'll cheer up a bit in the next chapter? Also, I know you say it in your author's note that this takes place in a boarding school, but you haven't really mentioned it in the story itself. Aside from that, nice job. I'm liking it so far and am definitely interested to see where it's headed. - Koki |