Reviews for shoplifting is evil

painted.music
2008-07-04
ch 1,

abusekonnichi wa

*cracks up* This was excellent! I loved it!

Hm, one part that I think detracted from the poem was the random "another dress"es scattered throughout. They didn't seem to have any special meaning, and they just - I don't know - didn't really fit so well. I think it'd have been much better if you ended it off with "so i had to shoplift that, too)."

Numbers 19, 17, 15, and 6 had be on the floor, rolling with laughter. This was just great... an amazing way to break up the day. *grin*

Ha det
-Shan-

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