I read them all, and I've gotta say, you're an amazing poet. Just the way the words and syllablese flowed so perfectly and rhythmically...and even the way you separated your stanzas was genius. My favourite was the first one, because I really liked the lines:

"a photograph of a

crowd, silhouettes bleeding

together white"

anyways, excellent job :D

so now I've gotta favorite this. this collection contains some of your best work to date. nice job.

wow! I quite like this. (not to sound hokey, because that wow! can only come off as so). lots of memorable lines, like how you open: or the last line in a novelty song. but then it continues. and it's great. it really is. plus- the formatting, despite FP's best attempts to eat it (nom nom nom) works.

good poem

short but good