I liked this, it flowed very well. It was mega depressing, but I guess that was the goal. You did a good job with the emotions and fear of being caught. Nice work. Review Marathon Weekend (link in profile)!

-Peace out.

It flowed well and I like this and it's handle on emotion is well. It's almost sad though, it has a sad vibe to it, like makes me want to cry sad, but I still love it

Flowed really well. Haunting imagery!