Okay, I guess you most deffinetly deserve a review for these stories.

I started book one towards the end of last week, (It's Friday where I am, so I started around Thursday/Friday last week.) which is weird because I'm a fast reader. The summery was awesome, really got my attention, I don't know why though. The first chapter of the firt book pulled me in, I really love your writing style.

I think you've got some great talent. And even though I read this series already, if it were to get published, I would deffinetly buy it and put it with all my other favorite books. (I'm also a VERY picky reader, so that was a great compliment.) But I bet you already know how great your story is, and how fantasticly you use that rare talent to draw people into a story.

Also, you ended the third book PERFECTLY. At least, that's what I think. It's like you tied up all the loose ends, with the readers being sad that it ended, but so happy that it ended in that way.

AWESOME!

Wow, what to say here?

First off, I think that your follow-up story (not a sequel) idea is an intoxicating thought, like you said quite different than ReGen ever was. Sounds incredibly hard to write, and even difficult to read. But it sounds like a good project

Ojinna and Micah were both neccasary cruelties in this story, they ended much the way they deserved to (Karma is a bitch!)

A prologue would be a stellar idea, it would add to the intense mystery surrounding this strange redhead we see at the beginning.

I've said it before, but your characters come off as so gritty they have to be real, that is what drew me into this story, so thanks for the wild ride!

I'm not done reading you as long as you are writing stuff, so go for whatever you feel like writing next.

The word I would like to use to describe the Epilogue is 'Quaint'... take that how you will :)

Catchya later!

Okay... first things first.

I personally think this story was too short. That's not to say it should be some 200 chapter monstrosity, but I feel that certain plot developments and character aspects could have been expanded upon. Especially the final showdown with Madden, which only ended much to quickly as you've painted him out to be this ominous ruler throughout the series.

That being said...

I find the rest of the story absolutely amazing. The characters are well thought out, and I found myself really caring about what happened to them (especially Garrett and Cora who are still my absolutely favorites). The plot isn't convoluted or cliched, and you have a great writing style that can still improve even more in the future.

In the end, I'd give this series a 9/10 as it's definately apart of my top ten favorite series on all of Fictionpress.

P.S. PLZ make another story centering around Phen Ryder. It has alot of potential and I'm sure you can craft another excellent story. =)

-Nights

Well I have to admit that I was deeply enjoying this story as always I am sorry to see a good tale end, overall I loved your story, only a few errors in wording. The people were wonderful and well crafted. I hope to find more work out of you.

Faithful Reader,
Shanae'

If Elle can come back from the dead after being infected from the dead, why can't Madden? Still, the ending was magnificent. If you're going to write something else after you finish the epilogue, I'll definitely check it out.

This was an incredibly emotional chapter, though I am not sure that Nathan's depression was conveyed as strongly as it could have been. I'm not sure what its lacking, but maybe the fact that he doesn't really dwell on the obvious solution(suicide) anything but incredibly breifly.

Don't freak out! I loved the chapter, It *almost* made me cry, and I'm a big tough man ;) The story was excellent and I think you took the end in the more positive direction with the ressurection, the story was really depressing anyway, so kudos to you! (I really had no clue which way you were going with this one)

One other thing, I feel like the emotional weight dropped when Lorelei woke up, though that could certainly just be me.

The epilogue awaits... What happened to Ace?

Aberrant Lycanthrope

You, my friend, are a terrible person! Cliffhangers are so cruel! The guns are definitly six-shooters, so in my mind that makes them revolvers :)... I watch too many westerns. Good chapter, the climax was amazing ( if slightly predictable, we all knew that Lorelei had the virus when she said shoot her too ) and I loved it to death. I think you pulled off Nathan's emotions just right, I still look forward to the mop up job that is the inevitability of the final few chapters!

Keep up the good work,

Aberrant Lycanthrope

Very exciting, can't wait for the next installment! For being immortal, Lorelei sure does get into some sticky situations...

I'm curious about what exactly the Old Gen was all about. If you'll explain it eventually, then I'll wait, cause I'll definitely be reading this story as you finish it up.

Another excellent chapter. With each new one I find myself anticipating the ending more and more. My only concern is that some sections of this chapter seemed a bit rushed. Other than that, keep up the good work. =)

Sweet, keep up the good work!

Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. This is a great story you have here, and it's written better and has a more compelling plot than other works that I've seen on this website. I can't wait to see how the ending is going to play out.

Btw, I hope you include more Garret/Cora moments before the end, even though she hasn't been around much Cora is one of my favorite characters. =)

I have just thought of this, but Lorelei must have enormous hips paired with some crazy skinny chicken legs to hide a revolver between her legs and not rub a groove into the thigh that wasnt sporting the gun, lol...

Yeah, good pace, the end is shaping up to be one hell of a roller coaster ride, so im looking forward to it, actually, Im looking forward to all of your bi-weekly updates, so dont let me down!

Lorelei reacted in much the same way I expected her to, I could never understand why he made such a big deal of it before.

Now Cora feels older, but when you introduced her, I got the impression she was young, as I said before, I just cant quite pin down what it was though...

Good chapter by the way, progressing at a good clip now, I cant wait for the end...

Poor, innocent Cora. She hasn't done anything wrong, yet everyone wants to kill her. Makes me feed bad for her, and it seems that Garret does, too.

That said, I love this story. Keep it going, I really want to see how it ends.

Incidentally, how old is Cora? I had the impression she was eight or nine years old, but if Garret lets his mind wander to her, either she's a little older than I thought, or Garret is a pedophile.