it was awesome.. *-* abit dark in a way since its about Fred dying and having a hole in his head but yeah..XD
I liked it aloty.. =o

to tell you the truth you are not too young to die people die at birth think about it huh and this dog well dogs are scary if there big and barking and eating you so i suggest carrying a gun if possible

I find this tragic and hilarious at the same time... I'm ashamed. XD

Gosh, this is so nightmarish but funny!

"He was my shining knight/with a hole in his head."
--Oh my goodness, pure genius! Hilarious. :)

This is the most delightful poem I have ever read on fictionpress. xD The ending makes it perfect.

Not the most exciting thing on the planet...some of the middle is off of the rhyming scheme (some of the syllable-counts are a bit off...), but the last two lines make it for me. It just seems like a broken perfect dream with humor in it. (And I'm sorry if that makes no sense at all...I'm a bit crazed today).

-ET

That was cute! XD LOL I loved it I love all your stories that I have read... infact...hmm you get chased by a dog.. *Frowns* Evil evil creatures they can be...

dude. I loved this. Lol.
I don't really have much to say, but it's brilliant :)

Pretty morbid and bizarre, but makes it all the more appealing.

Good job, thanks for sharing, enjoy~

Ehehe, good luck with the dog. I sympathize, I get so scared of big dogs.
Lol, funny poem. Though little typo in the first line, ya need to have 'He asked me to dance,' on a new line.
Gaia rox! lol.

hey you know that spatula thing in allie finkle's rules for girls well did you know he same thing hapend in princess diaries. you still coming tomorow?
ps did morgan tell you?

omg i love it. its hilarious!!