oh my god! i love this story so so much! i couldn't even listen in class! I just kept thinking about this story! i absolutely adore the ending, how you wrote a poem! sequel?

ohh...

poor dear! i hope she does! and i really dislike ethan!

i wish i was adrienne and i had my own xavier

you seriously have talent. this story is so unlike any other vampire story. it's about compromise & letting love settle. i really liked xavier's and adrienne's chemistry it was funny & very natural. great story keep up the great work.

I love how your prologue is in poem form. Nice.

L really loved the story :D but it's sad that it has such a short ending... :) anyway... good idea with the poem it was really good! :D

interesting...

aw, it's over! i'm sad now): it was really good! loved it!(:

The prologue really got my attention!
Great start! :)

nice...loved it

Reminds of me Vampire Knight XD You know that manga / anime? All the night class, day class, daughter of the principal being a vampire betrothed to the night class "king" without knowing it etcetc...

Did you base it on Vampire Knight?

I really loved the prologue and epilogue. The story was great also. Love your talent. Keep it up.

The story was fabulous. Looking at your title, i'm surprised that there wasn't some sort of mention of Leona Lewis's song (it ties in pretty well with this story) I do wish that there was more chemistry and passion between them.. more jibing, because they stopped after a while. I also recommend a glimpse of what this eternal love with Xavier is like... perhaps a short scene?

man this is just a rip of vampire knight