ok so what has taken so long for you to update? i want to know more! this is a good story very well written...

Hi,

just read this story (after reading some other things you wrote) and I can just say that I really, really enjoyed it. It was catching, the characters are interesting and I certainly would love to know how it will continue. So please...update soon!

NU

YOU MUST CONTINUE!

This really is beautifully written. I absolutely adore it. The discriptions im not To sure about but never the less, regardless, it is amazing. I will personally strangle you to death if you stop so I wouldn’t stop!

Please don’t satop, I love it, and I'm sure the rest of your reads do too.

Beautiful Talent.

Sam
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Update, update, update!

I'm already in love with Alat and Senata, and their interactions with each other are fun/hilarious.
I can't wait to see what happens next with Nalvata and the duo.

This is a creative and upbeat story, and I'd hate for it to end so suddenly. :]

yeah you definatly have to finish this story now

dnt worry i think your story is the ** too, so update soon

whoa...imagine the sex between those two...kinky...lol

Okay, what the hell?

Really interesting and love the plot so update!!

Its only fair if i review bothh chappies :p and it seems the girl isnt half bad after all ...cant wait to know if she's the enemy or what:P

Update soon, plzz :D

Oh, Im loving this story, especially alat's character..plz update more..:D

great story can't wait for next chapter

OMG, i love this chap.
i like how u made senata and alat, idk, get more mature?
Anyway update please.

damn, you keep churning out these great stories! i love them to bits. definitely want to see what happens next... please can we have some more chapters? :)
~Heffy

O_O; WTH? WHY DID SHE KNOCK THEM OUT? EH? @_@ O_O; lol...well, great climb-x -_-; *stares* -_-; and here you are, crazy enough to even 'THINK' about not keep going with this story? ha! you're crazy! >=o