This is so lovely. :>

Aw.. That was so cute! Awesome story!

Agh! I fricken love this story, it's wonderful! I especially love Jack
And well, Matts ok too. : ]
Great story!

Aw... CUTE;) THIS STORY IS AWESOMEE!

Yay thats so good i loved it good job:)

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“I- You-” I sputtered. Finally, I narrowed my eyes at him menacingly. “I loathe you.”

“You know, if you change the “a-t-h” to a “v”, that forms a different word entirely.”

Wow, I see a wonderful quote here. :)

i loved this story!
it was very well written
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It's very nice and it's making me giddy. BUT I find the part where she said that she has never loved Matt confusing. I mean why would you want to date someone you don't even love? And to think that she has dated him for one and a half years--Don't you think it's a little too long? And as for Jack, why now? Why, after so long, only did he confess? And when he said he couldn't lie to his best friend anymore, well, he had been for the past one and a half years. But you know what, I think these stories ARE meant to be unrealistic because love and romance are never meant to make sense. And that is why I LOVE it. I'm not going to ask you to change this story and even if I do, who am I to tell you to do so? It's very sweet and well described. Definitely adding it into my Favourites. I know I sound very paradoxical but hey, sue me. This story made me this way. Keep it up. You're good. ;)

cute story...loved it

Lovely story!

Naw! I love Jack!!

that was so adorably cute. i looved it. i was cracking up. dude, her left eye twitching uncontrollobly?! pahahajaja.

cute, unbelievably adorable and funny
:D