Hilarious, yet so so true.

wow, i thought the main character was being held captive or something serious.. well, in a way she was xD. really good twist, i would of never guessed

oh wow, I love the blind date twist at the end. :D

hehe. I'd probably vow the same

Omg, I never expected it to be a blind date. haha, I love it. How did the competition go?

Ha! What a wonderful twist! As soon as I got to "waiters," I had to stop and laugh at myself... This really is very well written. How did the competition turn out?

-Cesalie

Wow, this fooled me! XD I thought it was...well, it's too awful to day! Anyway, did you win the competition?

Tris

This is really good! I liked the dark undertones in the beginning that made it feel ... dark. This is a lot like my 55-word stories, so maybe that's why you liked that. I really like this though! This is SO going in my C2!

Write on!

A nice little step into the than a hint of truth about blind dates too.

Interesting... Nice writing style though! It started out exciting, but I guess I just like the longer stuff. What grade did you get?

Funny! I had a completely different picture in my mind. For a second, I thought, "hey, what's going on? I thought she was bound and gagged or something."

lol haha, talk about humour! this is so good. i was so not expecting the ending of that! poor boy though. this is so going on the favourites. but for a 500 word competition, can you write that little?