|Reviews for Daisy Chains|
| painted eyes 7/6/08 . chapter 1
This is very sweet. I like the rhyming of 'flames' and 'games'. The last line was so sweet and cute. When I saw 'teenage flames' I was thinking "Uh-oh, its going to become sad" But the word choice of 'innocuous' just reeled it right back to the innocent vibe that this poem portrays!
Keep up the good work, life on rewind!
| totallyinspired 7/5/08 . chapter 1
I don't usually like haikus but this was cute!