 Kajal 2009-11-05 . chapter 5 This story's so interesting. I'm guessing since the word counts so low and it's been a while since it was updated, that's why it hasn't gotten many reviews but I'm sure if you do plan on continuing eventually, it'll start to pick up. It was a great start and I'd love to read more =) |
 Katie-Maude 2008-07-22 . chapter 4I like the story so far, but it's a little slow moving, especially in these first few chapters. I guess, I expected to hear more about Nick's case than about his married life so soon in the story. I hope you get to that part soon. |