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| dreamshell 2008-08-19 ch 2, | abuseGood to see an update. ;) Hmm... a few minor typos throughout. Might wanna do a quick edit. Otherwise, it's good. Might Shuey be something of a reference to Dune's Dr. Yueh? Also, is the Martian perhaps a reference to Stranger In A Strange Land? The suspended animation bit in particular seemed reminiscent to me. Liking it so far, though some description of the characters would be nice. |
| Jave Harron 2008-08-15 ch 2, | abuseOkay, interesting flashback, but a comment. You mention human "sentience." The correct term would be "sapience," since "sentient" merely refers to being aware of surroundings. Sapience refers to the ability to consciously think. |
| dreamshell 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseNice setup. =D I'll keep my eye on this. |
| Jave Harron 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOff to a good start with Sheng doing the repairs. Hoping to see some interesting things soon. |