Again, you made Harold's personality great, only he is a little more serious, but it still fits. And the part where they're transforming and Aprl's like "April!" made me laugh. oh, and the hamsters/guinea pigs/other small animals are the normal size of normal ones, but since they're interacting with human-sized people it works a little better in this. The wolf/cats are they're normal size too. But overall, this is great so far!

Good start to this series, however long it's going to be. I liked the characters from Cloverbud and I believe the instrument Allison was using is a reference to Ghostbusters. Random there, looking forward to the next chapter to see the Enega Warriors in another world much different from theirs. Peace out.