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Aslan Israel 2008-07-06 . chapter 3
This is my favorite of all of these. The chorus works really well. The verses seemed a little forced for overall rhyme, but the idea is still there. Great job.
Aslan Israel 2008-07-06 . chapter 4
And Charlie walked where others merely dream
So he's walkin' all alone, yeah, it would seem

My favorite lines in this one; it's just got a nice rhythm. Pretty nice work for a song.
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