 BLAKKSTONE 2008-11-07 . chapter 31Hey, Tears.
Nice action, quick and brutal. Perhaps not as emotionally involving as I expected, but well done.
The end is nigh... |
 GataBaja 2008-11-06 . chapter 31NO! you killed them all! and uneventfully too! how could you! |
 BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-30 . chapter 30Hey, Tears.
I am an influence, huh? Hope its all positive.
Had I know you needed an army, I would have lent you THE SENTENCER.
This story is coming to a close...
Great action, emotional content...Good stuff. |
 GataBaja 2008-10-29 . chapter 30i'm confused... i thought torro didn't like rap music...
love the subtle refrence to the anthrax. |
 GataBaja 2008-10-29 . chapter 29... my only regret was that it was not long enough...
i did like it much! |
 GataBaja 2008-10-24 . chapter 28YES! sweet! love the master/Number scene! (should have added something with isabella though... would have loved to see her reaction...)
but no yaoi. they're more fater/son than guyxguy...
sweet chapter. I can't wait to see the marshall torture scene! |
 GataBaja 2008-10-16 . chapter 27nice! a torture/interrogation of crawford by gio and 18... sweet. can't wait to see THAT.
that would totally get torro on edge! i love it i love it! |
 BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-12 . chapter 26Looks like the Spade Family is closing in on the Numbers.
This should be a hell of a showdown when it goes down.
Can't wait. |
 GataBaja 2008-10-10 . chapter 26*starts jumping up and down shouting "YES!! YES!! YES!!", earning stares from other patrons in the library*
exelent. i love this chapter. love how you put trevor in charge, love it all! muchas gracias senor!
Trevor's more of a lemoncello kinda guy, being italian and all... but whiskey's all and good...
anyway, i can't wait for a huge 3-chapter-long-interrogation-tortureseque(by trev of course!)-absolutely-awesome-ending.
don't keep me waiting tears... i love you |
 GataBaja 2008-10-08 . chapter 25*begins slow clap*
nice orkin man... nice.
Can't wait to see more of my precious maracellis thou. you know me and trevor got it ON!
*barry white beginst to play in background and rose petals fall to the floor*
lolzrz |
 BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-05 . chapter 25Nice carnage.
Heartbreak isn't wasing anytime...Oddly, still craving for a normal life. School, homework, killing hundreds of gangsters.
Glad to see the kid back. |
 BLAKKSTONE 2008-09-22 . chapter 24Nice chapter, explosive fight sequence, spectacular mélée brawl...
Where to from there? |
 GataBaja 2008-09-22 . chapter 24*sigh* Raphiel should have TOTALLY done the interrogation. it would have been much better eye candy than a couple of lame secret service agents. *rolls eyes* god. those guys can't do anything compared to the Numbers |
 GataBaja 2008-09-19 . chapter 23awhawhaw...aw.. why tears? why?
I wanted to see how that was going to end!... i think i'm changing sides too...(you'll understand after my next chapter) |
 BLAKKSTONE 2008-09-18 . chapter 23One big happy family...
Good stuff, real cliffhanger.
Emotional violence as well as physical.
Keep it coming. |