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BLAKKSTONE 2008-11-07 . chapter 31
Hey, Tears.

Nice action, quick and brutal. Perhaps not as emotionally involving as I expected, but well done.

The end is nigh...
GataBaja 2008-11-06 . chapter 31
NO! you killed them all! and uneventfully too! how could you!
BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-30 . chapter 30
Hey, Tears.

I am an influence, huh? Hope its all positive.

Had I know you needed an army, I would have lent you THE SENTENCER.

This story is coming to a close...

Great action, emotional content...Good stuff.
GataBaja 2008-10-29 . chapter 30
i'm confused... i thought torro didn't like rap music...

love the subtle refrence to the anthrax.
GataBaja 2008-10-29 . chapter 29
... my only regret was that it was not long enough...

i did like it much!
GataBaja 2008-10-24 . chapter 28
YES! sweet! love the master/Number scene! (should have added something with isabella though... would have loved to see her reaction...)

but no yaoi. they're more fater/son than guyxguy...

sweet chapter. I can't wait to see the marshall torture scene!
GataBaja 2008-10-16 . chapter 27
nice! a torture/interrogation of crawford by gio and 18... sweet. can't wait to see THAT.

that would totally get torro on edge! i love it i love it!
BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-12 . chapter 26
Looks like the Spade Family is closing in on the Numbers.

This should be a hell of a showdown when it goes down.

Can't wait.
GataBaja 2008-10-10 . chapter 26
*starts jumping up and down shouting "YES!! YES!! YES!!", earning stares from other patrons in the library*

exelent. i love this chapter. love how you put trevor in charge, love it all! muchas gracias senor!

Trevor's more of a lemoncello kinda guy, being italian and all... but whiskey's all and good...

anyway, i can't wait for a huge 3-chapter-long-interrogation-tortureseque(by trev of course!)-absolutely-awesome-ending.

don't keep me waiting tears... i love you
GataBaja 2008-10-08 . chapter 25
*begins slow clap*

nice orkin man... nice.

Can't wait to see more of my precious maracellis thou. you know me and trevor got it ON!

*barry white beginst to play in background and rose petals fall to the floor*

lolzrz
BLAKKSTONE 2008-10-05 . chapter 25
Nice carnage.

Heartbreak isn't wasing anytime...Oddly, still craving for a normal life. School, homework, killing hundreds of gangsters.

Glad to see the kid back.
BLAKKSTONE 2008-09-22 . chapter 24
Nice chapter, explosive fight sequence, spectacular mélée brawl...

Where to from there?
GataBaja 2008-09-22 . chapter 24
*sigh* Raphiel should have TOTALLY done the interrogation. it would have been much better eye candy than a couple of lame secret service agents. *rolls eyes* god. those guys can't do anything compared to the Numbers
GataBaja 2008-09-19 . chapter 23
awhawhaw...aw.. why tears? why?

I wanted to see how that was going to end!... i think i'm changing sides too...(you'll understand after my next chapter)
BLAKKSTONE 2008-09-18 . chapter 23
One big happy family...

Good stuff, real cliffhanger.

Emotional violence as well as physical.

Keep it coming.
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