I found it again! Yay... I didn't review the first time I read this because, well, I didn't have an account. But now I do =D Very nice so far, yes it is.

I love The Raven...

By the way, it's Katharyn. If you couldn't tell.

Tell me you're writing more of this. I worried when I saw the author's foreword at the start, but it actually fits the slightly rambling narrative exceptionally well. And I don't mean rambling in a bad way. The narrative feels nicely informal in a way that would be very easy to mess up on and sound horrible, but you carry it off very, very neatly. It gives something of a casual edge to what looks like a very engaging story and gives the narrative far more character, if that's the right word, than the usual fare.

I actually liked this more than I thought I would. The dialogue is enjoyable, I like the premise, theissue with the anachronisms sounds like it could become something very entertaining.

Would like to see more. :]