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Anonymous 2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Rickroll in text form?! OMG NO WAY
Jonathan Swift 2008-08-11 . chapter 1
Here's a modest proposal for you: Write something original or get lost.

When your account gets taken down, no one is going to remember who you were and no one will care.

Now, let's get down to the basics, shall we?

The piece needs to be divided into paragraphs. Without them, it's very hard to read. You need to make use of periods, commas, and semi-colons.

The repetition is annoying.

And the bold type is hard to read.

Now get to work, ferret boy!
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