I think it would be really interesting to add jensen's point of view on the last chapter/epilogue. I mean, it is him telling her, so it would be really cool to see what's going through his head.

I really liked the whole thing... the last part was more cliche than any other part... but i still liked it. :) Good job.

Hey... Ok, um... not trying to sound too critical, but... if you use the word definitely... spell it correctly... instead of defiantly.

I loved this soo much :)

Really cute story.

Great story! I would've liked to hear her say it back, but it was a really great story! Great job!

The story was cute. I like Gwen a lot, but I honestly think this story went by way too fast.

Need to check your spelling and grammer.

I do hope you post another chapter to this story in which she also tells him that she loves him.

that was so cute! i loved it!

HEII
ya u do suck
i thought u would hav a amazing ending
but no ...
its ok only if u update soon
plz :(

totally lov ur story
i hope its finished
xx

u suck! lol! jk!i opened it ready 4 a chapter then realized its just a AN!! lol! i dont feel bad bout saying u suck cause right now i suck cause i havent even started the fifth chapter 4 LitWC. so i suck 2! lol!! i want to read ur new story when u get it posted!!

x's

I'm really really enjoying this storyy.
Update soon!

Love the story!! Please update!!

aww its such a cute ending...a sequal? or maybe a story of another character mentioned here? but anyway i really enjoyed this story of yours...continue writing more!

i forgot to mention...i am glad nothing happend between Rachel and Jensen...Thank Goodness...well...more like...Thank YOU