Wow. Harsh and intense and very well paced. I can totally sense the fear this person feels. Great title! it pulled me in and then never really let me go. Did you come up with this in one sitting? It's awesome--and really creepy!
Great job!
~Ara

O, very creepy. This is a great story. I've always wonder what is one's thought before meeting the end.

Ooh, creepy.




Good start.

wow. very haunting. it made my stomach uneasy. it actually sent chills down my spine. good... no... GREAT job. :D

Oh, spooky. The stream of spoken thoughts was haunting, yet realistic. Very well done.

- Koki