This is really interesting. I especially like the last four lines.

perfect.
creates a story of my summer.

It's a good poem. I really like the line 'throw confetti on the ashes and watch the pieces burn.' It's a powerful line.

This was confusing at first, but I really, really like it going over it again. There are some great images and lines (like "throw confetti on the ashes and watch the pieces burn," and I love the tone of the piece. Also really like the phrase "the burning party." The "yah-yahs" and "antsy-pantsies" lines have a dark yet some humourous quirkiness to them- tis very interesting, I love it. Bravo!

that's so creative. i like the thought. well written. :]

I was going to say I really love the ending, but your other reviewers said that, so i don't know what useful thing i can say now. let me think...

damn, still nothing. but great job anyway, and sorry for the patheticness of this review.

-pq (comment once again brought to you by limited computer access.)

I love the ending of this, the last two lines of it were the most powerful for me. I love the touch of sarcasm in it, and what can I say, but I'm glad you're updating again. I love reading your work.
Excellent work, as always
Smiles,
Danielle=)

:] So glad to have you back.

I really liked those last two lines. Just a display of how easy it is to make the voices inside our heads of how things should be louder than how it really is. Ignorance [self-indulged that is] is bliss. Great job!

I really like it. The cynical sarcastic voice is done really well.

Wow, very bitter but i loved the ending. I'ts as if people are ignoring the situation, closing themselves off from the death and people find this unjust. Great work, i loved the cynicism in this.