Hey,

Just finished reading your story again. I really enjoyed it and think you did a great job. I also think this story could easily continue on if you can give Kira and her friends some sort of mission or problem to deal with.

Just a suggestion you could have Roll come back bloody and hurt after he was jumped and robbed by a rival group. Kira while struggling to get her body back in proper working order could work with her friends to set right what happened to Roll.

For some reason I have the impression Kira is from a well to do family but for whatever reason has decided she would rather live of the fringes of society. You could work in her having to keep a low profile so her family doesn't find her.

Like I said just suggestions that you can take or leave. The story as it stands is good and I would like to thank you for sharing.