I really like how you described everything. Brilliantly done :D
You used such powerful words and phrases like (to me, anyway) 'melting my flesh', 'exposed and shriveled', 'the imaginary guttural sound a cruel blow', etc.

I find this melodramatic. Is the speaker a thirteen-year-old, perchance? Maybe you could create a more nuanced piece by anchoring the character - right now we don't even know their name, lifestyle, or even if such intense feelings are justifiable or if they're just emotionally unstable.

painfully beautiful. second last para hits close to home. you have wonderful skill, keep writing.