“Have you ever noticed how Captain Crunch totally fucks up the top of your mouth?”

Lmfao.

I love all the quirky characters. It makes the story so much more fun hearing Steve and Rubber making their comments.

The last part...yeah...that was catchy. And cute. And basically, I loved it. Better than ice cream...and rice krispies.

Yay ] ! 4 the update !

More soon ?

Kthxbai xx

Loved the chapter. I'm really sorry for not reviewing last chapter I was busy with school and I was reading twilight as well. I'm really really really really really really really sorry. I hope you forgive me. Anyways Update ASAP!

I liked this chapter. I like Riley. I like Ridge. I like how he was nice but isn't like the perfect good guy who will take the bitching and crap attitude from the female lead.

I like both of them were broken.

And I like where this is heading. The pacing is beautiful. They already have a history and I'd have hated waiting until chapter 20 before they met again, how some authors do things.

Anxiously waiting the next one!

Hahaha. Steve seems really cool :) I like him already :P

I like this story so far, can't wait for the next chapter!

This was great. I love it. . At first I thought the Steve and other guys would be like... a band of renegades or something like that, but they really seem to be like cool people from the glimpse here. It's pretty awesome.

I really like this so far! I stumbled upon this by accident today, and I'm really glad I did. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

-Grace

Love it!

I like your story so far. Ridge is by far my fav. character. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

oh, my gosh, you overbearing writer! haha, it was lovely, lovely, lovely. i like the "laughing contest" between riley (my middle name is riley ;D) and ridge. and i also like how amusing steve is.

one of my favorite lines:

"I didn’t like this – Steve sounded like he wanted to rip my throat muscles out and use them to floss his teeth"

i just get the weirdest mental picture hearing that.

how long did you stay up writing this? did you even get any sleep?

haha yay. she rememebers him, but ..it didnt go to well hahha. steve makes me laugh. It seems like him and Ridge are close.

nice chapter. i like your story :)

I was SO happy to see your update! I didn't feel your chapter was awkward at all... and I immensely appreciate that you're pacing yourself. I liked meeting the new characters.

Good job!

It's almost six in the morning and I haven't slept, so either the grammar was fine and dandy, or I didn't see it bad )

I'll try to find a picture for you!

Also, I was much like you - hated cigs - but since I am moody and weird, I tried it last year.

I don't like the smell or how it feels but it was a bit frustrating to get clingy to it. Definitely not worth it, but, I won't gasp and scream bloody murder if you give in too.

Good story so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, Riley's further first-day exploits, and her inevitable reunion with Ridge. Here's hoping to a quick update! :)

-GAB

i getin good

can't wait for her and ridge to pick up there friendship where they left off