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| Jesusfreak43091 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abusewow, i like how you expressed your feelings and emotions in this! it's very evident how you feel in the middle of each stanza, the flow gets thrown off, but somehow, since it does with each stanza, it makes it flow better... my favorite line: If you could only see the funny side of suicide |