Pretty. Very, very, Pretty.
~Becca

I know this feeling.
Good job expressing yourself.

Hm interesting though I do have to say though that it seems that your poem is more about lust than love. Lust in definition is self-gratification wile love is selflessness. There is a demand for something and no heed to waiting. In the poem what the “heart” is saying can be identified with carnal nature, which deals with self-gratification however the “heart” is suppose to deal with actual love, which is selflessness. Just thought I would point that out other than that good poem identifying with the ideals of today’s society well done.