Wann endlich vertont jemand deine Gedichte? Ich höre richtig die melodie

I really loved this. This is extremly relateable. Peace.

aw. this is sweet. I like the part about baking cookies.

That was sweet. Actions really do speak louder than words. :) Though I have to confess, the "I want to bake cookies for you; though I don't know how to.." bit just made me laugh. Chat later. -Qzie

'Tis sweet and inspiring! How may one serve another to show love. To some, words are in essence meaningless and to others words mean the world however; this person is not content with just saying "I love you" they wish to do more and give of themself. Wonderful! I enjoyed this poem D

This is really nice! I like how you have expressed this. I always believe actions speak louder than words. Well done!

P.S. Thanks for your review on "Forever Stay", although I am not the original author of that piece. It was given to me by my loved one. I am afraid if I don't post it up here, I may lose that someday. It's very important to me, since real life changes so dramatic between us. 'sobbing...'

Aww. This is really cute.

"Stead of saying a silly thing,"...'stead

I don't like the repetition of I don't want to say I love you. I think in that part you can say it once and then say all the things you do want and then repeat it in the final two lines. Really nice piece, it's sweet & interesting.

this REALLY could be a song, you know that?

its wonderfull, I love it...

Such good logic when it comes to love..Emotional chaos put so well...

McKinley

I really like this poem.