the first happy ending i've read in a long time.

though i wasn't consciously waiting,
it was definitely worth the wait to read something so heartwarming.

wow
i love this
i love you're writing

this was really good.
the last line really struck in my mind.
it was short, but quantity isn't always important.

excellent piece.

This is absolutely adorable. I loved it just the way it was. ESpecially the last line, 'and they do'. The sentence seems a little abrupt and sudden, but in a way, it gets the point across that despite what everyone says, they're forever. Also, one reviewer mentioned that you should put in more detail. I, personally, have to disagree. I liked it just the way it was, with details here and there but not so much description that it became overbearing. Great oneshot!

it was all right...could do with a little bit of details. But i love the air of mystery and solemnity in the story...

I like this. A lot.

Bravo.

Beautiful ,really sweet. Well done.