|Reviews for Luminous|
| Isca 7/7/08 . chapter 1
"Fragrance of bloom before the prick." Wow. Your writing is just so...REAL. I can picture and practically feel everything in your words.
"Flowing sighs." Beautiful.
"Drifting murmurs." Haunting.
"As the rain rushes to its splash, you come to me-stillness whispers, and I am gathered in." You've done it again, MC. It's a masterpiece! Those last lines are amazing. You have such a genuine way of connecting to your reader! :)
Another Favourite :)
| zeke.soritsu 7/7/08 . chapter 1
Nice poem though, in my opinion, it should ryme in the next one. But here, it just doesnt seem neccesary.
p.s. i wrote a poem if you would like to read it
| kloun mannequin 7/7/08 . chapter 1
magical and sweet even if it's all about lies.
Fragrance of bloom before the prick