 Loopy 2008-10-03 . chapter 3 Wow. This is pretty amazing. If you turned this into a published novel, I'd read it for sure. You have a gift for the sci-fi/fantasy genre. I'm loving this so far, and can't wait to read further. |
 Alethea 2008-07-21 . chapter 2 Wow that Student Council Information Committee is competent... Much more than normal high school students usually are. Why are they the ones assigning dorm rooms? Why do you torture us with plot speculation hooks?
Seriously, though, I really like the update. Aro is cool; "There's air out the window." Love the Clara-Rakesh interaction and Peter Pan the Cat. and, for me, Dr. Caine has the "dun-dun-dun" score playing non-stop when he shows up in story now. Look forward to the next installment! |
 Skylark1 2008-07-14 . chapter 2 I really like this! All the different races, and lots of mysteries already - it's really good! I eagerly await the next part.
Love the wikipedia reference, by the way. :D |
 Alethea 2008-07-08 . chapter 1 Good to see more fiction going up!
I like the premise, Babel Academy, the quotes you use, and the characters. A bit more scenery description would be nice though. |
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