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| RodeoGirl 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice! Wow, that was good! Just one thing. You are talking about the mistakes, not mistake so here is where I found the error, Though I wish I could rewind and stop myself from making the mistake. Maybe you should change that to mistakes. other than that Great job!! |