Aww... :3 Watermelon. ♥
Thank you for the adorable chapter! It was great.

*Waves* I understand! So don't worry, I won't kill you...

...

... yet. :D

Anyway, I loved the chapter! Thank you so much! Please keep writing?

WAH! HOW COULD YOU KILL HER? TECHNICALLY!? GOD, I HAVE TEARS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE! I'M HAVING A SOB FEST!

Oh God, Apple really IS dead? I'm . . . God, I'm CRYING! I HATE YOU!! I HATE YOU!

[Weep, weep]
Love the ending; it's amazing.
Personally, I think a sequel in which Apple and Sam (and Jennifer, I suppose) return would be good, but if not, this story was excellent by itself :)
nice work.

Wow. That was beautiful...

Forever and Always,
-Kayge

holy crap I am crying...
That letter...it was...perfect. You seriously couldn't have worded it any better. No joke, I swear to god if you change anything in that I will murder you in your sleep. And no, it won't be a nice and easy and quick death (are you kidding me? You know me better than that! I'm NOT someone who goes for the easy way out. Even subconciously, I choose the hardest ruotes possible).
Amazing ending...I swear to god you couldn't have done anything better than this...
Oh god time to pull myself together... -goes off to play flute which always makes me smile-
Jeez you know how to write something sad...

omg with those last words I've legit got tears in my eyes...WAH!
I love how the time goes by and...yeah...
It was a bit confusing during the part where you said tessa (or bubble :P) was queen was confusing. Like, the last part where you said "and tessa's baby watermelon". That was confusing to me, and I think the main reason was because you didn't explain who was speaking before the actual quote. So yeah...
Other than that awesome job! Loved it!!

wait. rnt u gunna write more about sam and apple 2? they were like my FAVORITE! - no duh they were the main squeeze in the story... but anyways don't end it there! write more plz plz plz!

Egad...leave us on a cliff hanger much? Meh that was amazing though...
I love how last chapter you were pretty much summed up newmoon in like a paragrph. Oh, I don't mean that in a bad way, just that Bella was just a shell, and thats how Blue was...absolutly amazing destription and I love the original feelings in it all...The description is (again) amazing and...yeah...
Also, I love all the feelings in this one too. It's all so...perfect. It shows you put a lot of effort and emotion into this. Very great job and I definatly can't wait for more, even if it means that blue won't be there anymore!

Holy crap...AMAZING CHAPTER! -reads next chapter conveniently posted-

NO!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!?

Brilliant. I love how Tessa figures everything out so fast with everything going on :)
However, this still isn't an ending and thus... I await more!

Excellent writing, as always.

Wow.

Intense chapter.

Forever and Always,
-Kayge