Thanks for your review awhile back, sorry it took so long to return it.

I didn't like the repetition, it got to be a bit much, especially the word and. I like your descriptions in the longer lines, they are interesting. I also like the word raze, that was different.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile). I see that you have a deviant art account, you might like their Artist-Author Trade topic as well.