This story is funny and interesting. i like it! update soon please.

Fun, fun. I like your style. Sally is a really likable character, with all her little quirks and things. 8D And Jack makes me smile. He sort of reminds me of someone. I look forward to the rest!
Laters! XD

woah...theres something unreal about this story...
but in a gud way so dun worry
its haunting so u cant stop reading and a pretty gud read at that

This is really well written.
You should keep going :]