I love your diamond seas and featureless faces, your dark looking glass world, your poetry. You like words like their sound in your ear and the image they evoke, I'm guessing. I do. You use bleachs alot. Try to find a like word.

I love the way you write. Great job on this, I would pick a favorite line, but I like them all. =]

I love the last line the very most. It's too haunting...the best.

Cheers,

Palace

I'm glad you didn't. Great piece. No lie.
Faith

loved that line about Disney mermaid eyes.

Oh my goodness! You're descriptions are beautiful! Kudos! ~CD