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Unknown Survivor 2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Interesting way of putting the topic. Nice job. (:

~Unknown Survivor
Peanuts Factory 2008-07-08 . chapter 1
Deep... I liked it.

Vain people... they do not see their
true self, nor do they wish to.
Just one note to remind ourselves that
no matter how much we think ourselves
beautiful, noone else may think so.
Ashelin 2008-07-08 . chapter 1
Interesting. I definitely liked the flow and rhyming you used, as limited as it was. It actually created this nice beat and rhythm. The subject matter was quite interesting also. I liked it, good job.
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