I absolutely love your stories! D: I've read all of your zombie stories, and one or two of your Rose ones.
Please update this. x.x; Every time you started but never finished one of your zombie stories, it made me sad.
I'm looking forward to your update!

It is an amazing story that any zombie fanatic would love to add to their collection! I bit of twists and turns on a real life apocalypse. I really loved it and would love to see more of it! *hint hint*

I'm hooked. More chapters if you please. Grant has to save the baby. I'm not emotionally tied to Betty and Gordon so their being zombies doesn't affect me. That is, if Betty is a zombie at this point. I'm sure I would be as useless as Ashley right about now.

It's been a long time, so remind me, to become a zombie all a zombie has to do is bite someone and they become a zombie, or do they have to kill someone then bite them or how does one become a zombie? A virus started the zombies?

Helen

lol 500. xD if only I have 500 fp accounts :P. Great job on this! I'm looking forward to more.

WWE! I loved this chapter. I love how you have them talking in their heads, or whatever its called. I'm too exhausted to think of what its really called. lol

No offense, but if someone else comes with them, they'll have... distractions, I guess you could say, from themselves. Like, they'd have to be on "sibling" behavior around 2 other people, instead of just letting their guards down, and I think that would kill this story. Just my two cents, now off to read Ch. 4.

damn, I dunno, I just came to the realization that you're a really good writer.

Can you still get me a link of the original Dan/Rose story please?

i love this story. i am intrigued by Ashley and Grant. please, keep updating!

Wow. This is exciting! I like Grant and his rational thinking. It's calming. I feel sorry for the baby though. Poor thing. But he'll have Grant and Ash to save him and raise him. That's one good thing anyway. And Ash will have a baby again. She miscarried ages ago, didn't she? That's what i figure anyway. I don't have a lot to say about this chapter. There was nothing wrong that i could see and i loved everything you included. So, will you please update something again soon? I don't care what. LoL. I'm not picky.

~Marie

OH MY GOD! She has a ZOMBIE in her HOUSE! In her BED even! With a BABY! EEP! That's not good. Oh my! That poor baby! I feel so bad for it. It was very effective to put that little mini-intro about how hard and long they tried to have one. The intro to the chapter was great too. I really loved the opening and thought it was definitely a strong point in the chapter. The description overall was great, or so i thought. LoL. Grant's sleeping reminded me a lot of my brother. He's a really heavy sleeper. Once he's out, a car could plough through his bedroom wall, and he wouldn't bat an eyelid.

On a completely unrelated note, thank you for your encouragment about my test. You were right after all, it wasn't that hard. In fact, it was actually pretty easy. I'm sure i passed. I have to wait until next week to find out my score, but i think i did all right.

Ok then! Please update again soon. This or Rain, i won't complain, but then, when do i ever?

Have a good one!

~Marie

Great chapter, again. :D

hmm.. who's Gordon and Betty? Intriguing!

Grant needs to stop messing around and get out of there!

=[ Poor lady...I think I see where that's going.

YAY! I LOVVE Ash/Grant chapters!(even though I know the next 8 will be) =)

I'm really glad you kept this story up lol. I was afraid it'd been taken down at first. I can't wait to see how everything plays out!