This poem is very simple but you convey your message and emotions very well. Good job.

Peace.

Amen! Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.

so true

Got that right! A very sweet and true poem.

Tris

well..i wont say itz nice n i won say itz 's ok.i think it'll b nicer if u8 maka it rhyme.

it's a little corny, but i do love god, so i like it.

That was pretty good! It almost reminded me of a song. Dunno which one, but it did. 2 things though. 1: Was the rhyming intentional? If it was, you'll need a bit more in there. If it wasn't, then sorry 'bout that! 2: This 'un's more of a nit-pick, but whatever. I think there is an extra line at the top of the page there. _

Yeah, that's it. I liked it. Geeze, I need to think of a different phrase to praise you with! I use this too much!

it's a little cliche, but i share the feeling. god is incredible! you should have seen how he moved through my church tonight. i want to write but it's like so late and i'm tired and ahh, it was incredible! anyways, good work.

Aw. it's sweet, and beautiful. Sounds like something that we would sing in church. I like it! Kudos. CD