|Reviews for Open Arms|
| May Elizabeth 8/30/08 . chapter 1
This poem is very simple but you convey your message and emotions very well. Good job.
| Needa S 7/28/08 . chapter 1
Amen! Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.
| fears up side 7/17/08 . chapter 1
| Tristan-the-Dreamer 7/16/08 . chapter 1
Got that right! A very sweet and true poem.
| Saba Irfan 7/13/08 . chapter 1
well..i wont say itz nice n i won say itz 's ok.i think it'll b nicer if u8 maka it rhyme.
| fatbird33 7/12/08 . chapter 1
it's a little corny, but i do love god, so i like it.
| Savella 7/10/08 . chapter 1
That was pretty good! It almost reminded me of a song. Dunno which one, but it did. 2 things though. 1: Was the rhyming intentional? If it was, you'll need a bit more in there. If it wasn't, then sorry 'bout that! 2: This 'un's more of a nit-pick, but whatever. I think there is an extra line at the top of the page there. _
Yeah, that's it. I liked it. Geeze, I need to think of a different phrase to praise you with! I use this too much!
| smile for the sunshine 7/8/08 . chapter 1
it's a little cliche, but i share the feeling. god is incredible! you should have seen how he moved through my church tonight. i want to write but it's like so late and i'm tired and ahh, it was incredible! anyways, good work.
| Captain-Dalien 7/8/08 . chapter 1
Aw. it's sweet, and beautiful. Sounds like something that we would sing in church. I like it! Kudos. CD