:O The suspense!! I'm dying to find out more and how the relationship between Liam and Lissy grows. Update soon please!

wow...this is awesome. you have to update soon! poor lissy - love her name btw. ;)

OMG! This story is so good!! I'm so intrigued by it! Thanks for writing it and please update soon!! ^_^

...I'm 2 hours and 33 minutes into August 4th and was fully planning on going to sleep, but how am I supposed to justify that NOW? Of ALL the random dates you could have written about, August 4th is the one you chose, so I'll keep reading and I'll review again (because that is what nice, decent people do).

Arobow

Wow... wow... just, wow...

Amazing chapter; amazing story. Ahh! Liam! I love Liam! *does fan gril squeal* xD

Poor Lissy. Almosted kidnapped and she can't even find out why. *muttering* Stupid noble family that's in the mafia...

Anyway, I can't wait for your next update!

-Jillian

I like Alice. She's a loud bookworm that eats a lot (it remind me of me. x])! Yay!

The diary is Will's, right? And he's the one she has to get married to? Am I right? Ah, I wanna know, but oh well. I really like the story so far.

-Jillian

Great one.

great story so far!!

its been 6 months since you've update =(

PLEASE UPDATE!

I'm sorry to complain so much in my reviews, but I again was puzzled that Lissy said she had been to the winter dance with the pot-dealer when in the first chapter she says she got sick and thus didn't attend.

Otherwise I've read your other two stories, but I actually do enjoy the serious tone of this one also. It has a bit of mystery, which is nice and I like Lissy because she's very relatable. She has quirks and genuinely cares for her family and she is impulsive but also cannot keep secrets. She seems very real. Having read all that you've posted now, I think characterizations are one of your strongest points.

I like it thus far but there are a few inconsistencies that bothered me. Lissy mentions having met her grandfather but then in this chapter talks about how he hasn't spoken to the family in 18 years (and she is 18.) Also the band talks about the British guy leaving school in two adjoining chapters, the second time as if the first conversation didn't even take place.

Hey, was reading this story a few months back then promptly forgot the title (go me, I'm sorry) but I'd really hoped you'd have updated by now... I am really enjoying it and love all the little twists and turns, although Alice is still my favourite character by far! So please update soon!!

This is a such a different story from what I'm used to! Please update soon!

Oh My Gosh - I really love your story so far. It is extremely intruiging. She is so lucky that Liam managed to find her in time. What on earth has she gotten herself into! I feel so sorry for her - whisked away from her family and into such a cold, lonely environment. What makes me think that Liam requested her as his bride- it's too much of a coincidence for him to leave her community just when she is told that her grandfather arranged her to marry.
Please, please update soon - I really can't wait to find out where your story goes next!!?!!?!?!?! :D