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smile for the sunshine 2008-07-11 . chapter 1
nice work. understand the feeling. self-condemnation is not of god though. remember, when you are forgiven, your sins are as far as the east is from the west. i was feeling like that the other day, and that is what my friend told me.
fleur de l'est 2008-07-11 . chapter 1
I love this. Makes me feel like a see-through and absolute sinner, but it is only then can we humble ourselves and love him with our whole heart. Well done!
~fleur
dork with a tennis racket 2008-07-10 . chapter 1
I loved this poem! theres lots of nights when im close to tears cause as i put it "God is pulling a guilt trip" He isn't. its juts one of those times when im feeling like crud cause of all He's done and i do almost nothing in return. I wish i could jsut have a day to read your poems they're great! thanks for commenting on mine and keep up they great work. Your poems are awesome!
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