|Reviews for the crooked way is made straight|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 7/22/08 . chapter 1
Amen to your last paragraph! I remember you talking about that day, it really must have been amazing to see miracles of God.
| simpleplan13 7/10/08 . chapter 1
Really interesting piece. I've never seen a piece like this at all. One thing that seemed odd to me was not capitalizing God and Jesus. Other than that your repetition worked well and your descriptions were interesting. Nicely done.
| prettyauthor 7/9/08 . chapter 1
this poem is so powerful i like the you showed the person being healed this is outstanding