Wow, this is really good. I like the theme too like the person who reviewed before said. Keep up the great writing. :)

Wow! I love how powerful this poem is! Its inspireing and motavational! Well Done!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥

I really like the theme of this poem--it's very positive and motivating, and I praise you for that. It's not often you find something like this here, so good job. I'm just going to say that sometimes, you went a little out of it being a poem, and more of a...moral story, but maybe that's just the way I read it.

I really like the title, by the way. I read this because of it.
Good job and keep writing.

-x-Eilish.