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Koki Enwai 2008-07-09 . chapter 1
So far, honestly, it seems to be a rather standard idea/story. The narrator doesn't seem that nice, especially calling her friend and idiot like that and assuming she's intelligent. . . Anyway, I'm still planning to read the next chapter. Just to see if things pick up.

Other than that, nice work so far.

- Koki
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