|Reviews for Forgotten Daughters|
| Koki Enwai 8/15/08 . chapter 4
That was my favourite chapter so far. No concrit here.
| Koki Enwai 7/13/08 . chapter 2
You really piquied my interest here. The interaction between the sisters was believable, but they're all pregnant? O.o Interesting. . .
Keep up the good work!
| Shiro 21 7/9/08 . chapter 1
Curious to see how you're going to pull this off...
| Koki Enwai 7/9/08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. I think I remember reading the original version of this. . . You've got quite a good thing going here. I like the touches you added that made it seem like the reader was right there in Puerto Rico. Very well done.